"A Day to Play" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pumpkinpi7782 On: July 27, 2010 08:52 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Love the story and loved the ending!!! I wonder if their will be a part two since Inuyasha has carried out his revenage?
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Title: yay Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2010 23:29 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow it's done it's been so long never though I see the day. So what do you have in store for the inu brothers Sesshy might be pup right hmmmm.
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Reviewed By: kale [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2010 00:49 CST Comment/Review: You neeeeeddddd a Sesshomaru pregnancy scene. You just do. ;)
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2010 18:16 CST Comment/Review: So glad you edited this story, the first chapter was always truly great, but the rest really benefited from the polishing. A little confused as to how much time passed between the birth of the twins and the next chapter where they seem to be much older. Anyway, like Nikkie23534 said, would love to see a pregnant Sess story (but not at the expense of Torn!). Thanks so much for your great story!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2010 17:50 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I always liked this story, and rereading it was a true pleasure. I thank you! I was wondering one thing... Did you ever plan on doing a short sequel to this? Maybe, you one focusing on Sesshomaru's pregnancy? Since it was implied, so micheviously! I wonder how the children will react to their father being the pregnant one? I know it would be up to InuYasha to rear it, like he does the older ones, but it would be funny to see him go though morning sickness, and getting fat, and strange cravings in he middle of the night! Great story! B reading U! BTW...Torn is the BOMB AS WELL!!!!
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Title: ch 10 Reviewed By: midnightsscream [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2009 20:41 CST Comment/Review: what a horrible place to stop!!! :( I was a little confused during things chapter. Where did the kids go by the way? Great job!
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Title: Ch 8 Reviewed By: midnightsscream [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2009 20:15 CST Comment/Review: wow. talk about a dramatic couple :0
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Title: CH7 Reviewed By: midnightsscream [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2009 20:02 CST Comment/Review: The puppies can talk now!!! This should be interesting. great job!
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Title: CH6 Reviewed By: midnightsscream [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2009 19:39 CST Comment/Review: OHHH! Did you really just have to go there at the end? I like the puppies :)
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Title: Ch5 Reviewed By: midnightsscream [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2009 18:33 CST Comment/Review: Well. The whole pregnancy didn't take long and I definately interested in what the baby will look like. I'm glad you made Kagome and understanding character. Most authors don't and it's kinda annoying at times. great job!
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Title: CH4 Reviewed By: midnightsscream [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2009 18:11 CST Comment/Review: Wow. Emotional Sesshomaru. He's crying and then he's laughing. I'm glad towards the end he was more his arrogant self. That's how I like him. I'm glad Inuyasha is starting to understand. Great job!
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Title: ch 3 Reviewed By: midnightsscream [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2009 17:39 CST Comment/Review: *grin* I like the end part. Inuyasha seducing Sesshomaru. great job!
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Title: ch 2 Reviewed By: Midnights scream On: December 27, 2009 17:21 CST Comment/Review: I liked this chapter. At the beginning of the story I was worried that this just wasn't going to work out well, but it may end up better than I thought. I love a caring Sesshomaru if it isn't completely out of character and you did a good job of keeping close to characters. great job! :)
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Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2009 02:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I have to say that once I got to the part where Sesshoumaru announces that Inuyasha is pregnant...I stopped reading. I have never really liked those...since I don't particularly get how its even possible... But then I scrolled up and saw your summary for this chapter and you have a point. I myself am a Creative Writing major....so I understand what you mean about writing things you don't like making you a better writer. And maybe, reading them will do the same. Therefore, I will finish reading this. But please, do not think I am trying to be rude. I love this fic. In fact, it has always been one of my favorites. The detail is great and the characters, while a little ooc, are somehow more themselves than if they weren't...if that makes any sense. I always love reading this fic, so much so that I printed it out to store in one of the 3 ring binders I use to store my most favorite stories. Although, up until today when I looked it up online so I could read it without the hassle of computer paper pages, I was unaware that there were more than four chapters. I am rather interested to see where you take this fic. Therefore...I'm going to go back to reading it now. XD
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Title: A DAY TO PLAY Reviewed By: BLACKCATBUTIFUL On: June 30, 2009 02:22 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOVED I WHEN ARE U GOING TO CONTINUE WITH THE FANFIC AM GONNA BE ONE OF YOUR BIGEST FANS
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