| "A Day to Play" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Title: ch 2
Reviewed By: Midnights scream On: December 27, 2009 17:21 CST
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I liked this chapter. At the beginning of the story I was worried that this just wasn't going to work out well, but it may end up better than I thought. I love a caring Sesshomaru if it isn't completely out of character and you did a good job of keeping close to characters. great job! :)
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Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2009 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that once I got to the part where Sesshoumaru announces that Inuyasha is pregnant...I stopped reading. I have never really liked those...since I don't particularly get how its even possible... But then I scrolled up and saw your summary for this chapter and you have a point. I myself am a Creative Writing major....so I understand what you mean about writing things you don't like making you a better writer. And maybe, reading them will do the same. Therefore, I will finish reading this. But please, do not think I am trying to be rude. I love this fic. In fact, it has always been one of my favorites. The detail is great and the characters, while a little ooc, are somehow more themselves than if they weren't...if that makes any sense. I always love reading this fic, so much so that I printed it out to store in one of the 3 ring binders I use to store my most favorite stories. Although, up until today when I looked it up online so I could read it without the hassle of computer paper pages, I was unaware that there were more than four chapters. I am rather interested to see where you take this fic. Therefore...I'm going to go back to reading it now. XD
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Title: A DAY TO PLAY
Reviewed By: BLACKCATBUTIFUL On: June 30, 2009 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED I WHEN ARE U GOING TO CONTINUE WITH THE FANFIC AM GONNA BE ONE OF YOUR BIGEST FANS
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Reviewed By: PUMPKINPI7782 On: May 09, 2009 20:37 CDT
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Excellent stroy so far. They went from being enemies to mates to a family. And those pups are something else. The boy is a loud livewire with a good set of lungs...and fangs (just like his 'mother'). The girl is a quiet, mysterious child with a bossy personality and a mean set of claws (just like her sire). And both parents have already picked their favorites and will probably spoil them rotten. Plus Inuyasha secret is out. I wonder how Sesshoumaru will react and what will happen next. I would love to find out!!!
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Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2009 18:41 CDT
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Ohh....oh please please...this just too cute. InuYasha turning into a girl on the new moon. That's awesome!!! I will patiently wait for the next chapter.
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Title: M-Preg chappie
Reviewed By: Quiet Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 12:24 CDT
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I had to read the whole story again because I have so many of your wonderful stories jumbled up in my mind. And guess what, I enjoyed myself all over again. Such yummy scenes. *sigh* I think that this might be the second story that I read about M-Preg. It is a very interesting concept to me. That leads me to wonder, how would our world be like if we all were neither sex and could choose to be either when its time to have a child... Thanks to you and those who reviewed your chapter for this update. It is nice to see how the unresolved issues were addressed; namely, Kikyo, Kagome and the fight against Naraku. It is nice to see how InuYasha's friends are still there for him when he is about to give birth. You meanie, leaving things at such a cliffy. I know, I know...Inu and baby will be fine but just how is the question. Take care of you, QS
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 22:07 CDT
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if inuyasha can survive sessy's had and poison through his stomach then he should be able to survive a c-section. but it has to be scary, what does shippo and rin think of everything that has happened?
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Title: I like this kind of Play. :-)
Reviewed By: Quiet Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2009 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I awoke early this morning and decided to see your work. I started with one that's 20 pages long. I plan to read your other ones when time permits. ;-) I missed the original "A Day of Play" so I can't compare but this posting is superb. Jenny and Hellfyrre you guys rock! Snowfall is lucky to have you in her corner. :-) Snow, I almost cried when Inu actually died. I loved it when Sesshomaru had the glass of wine next to the bed and threw it blaming InuYasha for "this." Yummy love scenes...although my five year old woke up and demanded attention...I need to read them again. I think that this is the first time that I have read about Sesshomaru crying. I appreciate very much how it happened. It was beautiful and believable. I also enjoyed InuYasha's "fed up with life" point of view because he does have every reason to want to send everyone to hell. The only thing that I could contribute as an observation is that I think that the jewel had outlived its use as a portal to the underworld. I'm sure that you know this already but I thought that I would mention it. I am very impressed with how you use words for description. How does one train oneself to do that? I can see that I can learn a lot from your work. Thanks for the time you have put into this story. I plan to read your other ones. :-) By the way, you made me laugh about your wish to own a lifesized anatomically correct Sesshomaru. Although, should anyone accomplish this then they best brace themselves for a long list of orders. Best, QS
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Reviewed By: IamJean-ClaudsHumanServantandloveit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2008 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it ^_^ they way you've represented Sesshoumaru-in-love is perfect. Because its true the love makes us both our weakest and our strongest. InuYasha is also very well writen, the way he just gives up, even going to the point of egging his brother on to get him to help him commit suicide. Perfect. Like I said I loved it and will be awaiting the next peice soon. ^_^ HS
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 23:32 CST
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i wonder what will happen when kagome finds out, hope to read more soon
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 02:16 CDT
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this is good, i cant wait to find out how everyone else takes the fact that inuyasha and sesshomaru are together
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Title: ladyjay62
Reviewed By: ladyjay62 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent!!!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love u 4 re-editing this story! All the little changes U made just makes it buttah! U got me tripping down memory lane with this! Like an old song that u haven't hear in a while, but when it plays your like 'Ah snap!!!' That is what this story is like 4 me! Thanks 4 the memories! B reading U!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am so glad that i discovered your stories! each one that i read adds so much entertainment to my life. i love the juxtaposition of the brother's emotional needs. usually, sesshoumaru is portrayed as being above all needs. i like your take on it much better. good luck with the continued updates. i look forward to them, and thank you for all you have done.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 02:04 CDT
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what will everyone else (kagome, miroku, sango, shippo, kikyou, jaken, anyone else like other lords, servants, ect) say and do? please update soon.
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