| "For The One You Love" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLILo On: August 22, 2008 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loving it! I can't wait to see inu's reaction when he really finds out what happened! Poor kagome! i wonder if the trama will really hit in her dreams and things! update when pos!
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Reviewed By: arielle On: August 22, 2008 06:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story very much! your doing an excellent job! please keep up the good work and write more please asap! thank you!
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Reviewed By: abercrombielvr07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 20:43 CST
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i mean't protecting, not proecting lol.
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Title: omg!
Reviewed By: abercrombielvr07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please don't let Kagome get pregnant!!! NOOO!!! PLEASE! I'M BEGGING YOU! but maybe Inuyasha could smell Naraku on her and get all sweet and proecting and WUVING! but,,, ya, i love how you didn't put much detail in the part!! i have a sensitivity to that, and you nailed it! thanks for a great story! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Novemberkid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story! Updait it soon! =D And dont forget to hold on to the charcters personalitys. It´s easely slips. ^^ And, if Kagome is pregnant, AND goes on whith the pregnancy, i will not continue to read the story. But i think it´s a great story this far^^ hmm.. I know!! She can´t be pregnant with Naraku!! Because she is an Prestess and her body destroys Narakus sperms! Yay! *happei face*
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 21:15 CDT
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Hoo-boy......Sh*ts gonna fly now! great Chap, but one wonders....Is K pregnant? What will she do if so? How a/b IY? Can't see her continuing THAT pregnancy, but ooh the possibilities if she does! Hmmmmmm, what if that's N's plan all along, and somehow she can't terminate without killing herself....nevermind, I think too much. On to the next chapter, and new angst!
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whats gonna be in the next chapter?is inuyasha gonna smell narakus scent on kagome?i love the inuyashaxkagome fluff.so please have it in the next chapter.i like the story.please update soon.
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree 100% with LadyCash. Updaye soon!! this is good, really good...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 02:36 CDT
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Interesting. A good start. Give us more.
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