| "Salvation" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very interesting....I liike it...it would be a wonderful thing to continue *smiles*
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Reviewed By: Blue Moon Sorrow's Silver Moon Tear On: September 12, 2002 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful plot line so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Mikan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful! ^^ I love the way you presented this, and I really enjoyed the story! Your writing style's wonderful! I can hardly wait until Sakura-chan meets "Xiao Lang"-kun! That could be very interesting... Since this is, "Not a fairy tale" I vote that they should despise each other at first? ::GRIN:: Maybe he'll end up being one of her "clients"? ::laughs evilly:: Just kidding! PLEASE post the next chapter soon! ::Grovels:: Oh, great goddess iDeam! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: redmistress Tomoyo On: June 21, 2002 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic has started very well. You really need to post new chapters, its not to leave me haning...it makes me cry. You have a great theme its very original. And yes you should make it into a lemon. |
Reviewed By: tori-chan On: June 18, 2002 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bloody fantastic! lemon would be pretty rad^_^ keep it up, i want more! |
