| "Underneath it all" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: laredith On: March 14, 2008 09:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is pretty great. I like where its going and it's flow. But the html code in it makes it REALLY difficult to read. I don't think I'm getting the whole gist of the story because it's all fractured. Please repost so I can read it again! I really liked what I was able to read.
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Reviewed By: Independent.C. On: January 01, 2008 19:31 CST
Comment/Review:
You do realize that all those numbers and keybord names make this story really difficult to read.
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Title: Woot
Reviewed By: savii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story ! hope you update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: yellowgackt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 23:03 CST
Comment/Review:
aah! im so confused. you text is full of html just to lest you know. but i like this, never seen this side of mugen written.
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Reviewed By: vampireXmuffin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 12:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this story lots,something is making the letters come out funny though,alot of messy-ness but i love the plot so i overlook the problems.update :)
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