| "The Power Of The Crests" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Cat On: August 05, 2002 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm rating kind of hard, (in comparison with the other reviews) aren't I? Well, on to the critique.
An interesting plot, but it was rather confusing. My suggestion would be to add some more description on the setting. There's alot of dialogue, but I think it should also be balenced evenly with descriptions. The characters were defined well, but I wasn't sure where I was. Not everyone knows, or remembers what Heighten View Terrace looks like.
"Nour called to her amigos."
I don't know what to call this... I'm thinking slang or jargon but not exactly. It's okay to use 'amigos' in place of friends I guess, but it semmed a little odd to me. Sorry, just my opinion. X.x
The last two paragraphs used the same starting phrase, 'A few hours later'. Try not to repeat expressions like that too close to each other.
Well I think that's all I have to say. I'm not going into further detail because I don't know that much about writing rules. Basically, I think it needs some more descriptions to lessen the confusion. Nevertheless, it's an interesting fanfic. Just keep on writing. I hope that helps! |
Reviewed By: Kuroi Doragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 12:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting view on the crests and the digidestined |
Reviewed By: judge On: June 30, 2002 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice but confusing. But good over all. |
Reviewed By: Cool*_* On: June 30, 2002 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like love it!!!! |
Reviewed By: ace 666 On: June 30, 2002 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very fucking new! |
Reviewed By: Brockiepoo15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2002 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I didn't understand it at first and then it got interesting and I read on. And then it all made sense in the end! Cool! Keep it up!
-Brockiepoo15 PikRppr1 =) |
