Reviewed By:CariMIlRod [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 20:34 CDT Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: The story is good so far but you should keep on using quotaion mark,it easier for the readers to know when the character are speaking and not thinking. Beside the quotaion your writing is good. Keep up with the great job.