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Reviewed By: PotionsPet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2010 18:03 CST
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Love the last chapter, the ending scene was adorable!
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Title: Hi again xD
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2010 16:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the end xD Beautiful xD really, I had to kind of read the fic again and I really like reading it again, so sweet and full of drama too, and the way kikyo died was the best xD I loved a lot this part "A bag of clay and bones? A golem? A monster?" I just hate kikyo sooooo much now, I think i'll just hate her more and more with the time jijijiji xD I love reading how she dies always xD juajuajua xD And the fic!!! I didn't remember how sweet it is, so beautiful, I DO love lemon xD and you're are so great, and the end!!! I loved re-loved the part when Inuyasha bit her again!!! Yay!!! It was like ahhhhh!!! that's exactly how i've always think about it xD sooo kool!!! Really I love you're fic from beginning to end xD this was my fourth time reading it, and I liked it the same way xD I just love Inuyasha xD Hey!!! have a great day and keep writing xD my best wishes for u xD And good luck with collage xD jijijijiji Byebye Eiko007
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2010 22:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice lemon, very well done. I look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Teardra [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2010 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thanks Snowfall, great last chapter I really did enjoy it. Don't be to hard on yourself it happens to the best of us. I hope to read more stories from you in the future. Thanks for the e-mail that was so kind of you.
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Title: whoops
Reviewed By: PotionsPet [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2009 14:06 CST
Comment/Review:
this is A Day to Play's 10th chap ^_^
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Title: Huh?
Reviewed By: Teardra [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2009 13:54 CST
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I don't understand where you what wanted to go with this last chapter. Its a bit confusing, you went from one couple to anther. It unfortunately did not mesh well with the other chapters. It seems like you accidentally put this in chapter in the wrong story. I like the story so far its just chapter 10 did not go well with the rest of the story.
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Title: Hi again xD
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! a great lemon!!! ahhhh!!! i was soo happy when I saw that you had update xD jijijiji this chapter was sooo cool xD and yes it answered my question jijijiji xD Poor Inuyasha has suffer a lot Kagome had to understand that xD jijiji... well I'll be waiting for you next chap xD take care and good luck with everything xD gambate!!! byebye PD are you watching Inuyasha kanketsu-hen???
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Title: Hi!!!
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2009 08:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah!!! Kikyo died!!! and Inuyasha finally made his choice!!! ohhhh the time it got but everything it's finally in place xD it's was great!!! the only thing that got me a little confused was the trust thing xD jijijiji... well I'll be waiting for the next chapter xD and you're welcome!!! you're fic it's just so great xD jijiji... ok good luck and i'll be waiting for the next chap xD byebye!!!
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2009 10:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!! thank you so much for updating!!! I reallly love you're fic and last weekend I red it again xD and this weekend when i saw i was just soooo happy xD and I'm also happy Kikyo was watching xD I do not like kikyo xD Well keep going I'll be checking on your fic and good luck with everything have a wonderful day xD byebye
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Title: Hi i love you're fic xD
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2009 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!! this was incredibly great!!! i has been so much time since i enjoyed so much an Inuyasha fic xD this was juts so wonderful!!! so perfect!!!! you have 100!!! really!!! i think that a lot of us like to draw so the sketches part was soooo wonderful xD really it's a very great idea and after that all sooooooo kool also xD i couldn't stop reading xD really, it's one of my favorites xD and i would really love to keep reading, i mean until the end, for you to finish xD pleasssssssse if you can, keep writing it, finish it xD and if not, well, it'll just come back and read it over and over xD jijiji this it's really kool really, good luck with everything, you're a wonderful writer xD have a super great weekend xD byebye
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 16:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I remember this, it used to be one of my favs! =D I'm so glad you've re-posted it!
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Reviewed By: Selina MacCloveror [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 12:38 CDT
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I think I read this a while back on AFF, and I loved it. I see you're editing it now, which gives me an excuse to read it again, and you're continuing it! ^_^ I really love it; I'll admit to flinching myself when Kagome slapped Inu. Ouch! I don't know if he deserved that, but at the same time, I can't blame her. The angst is killing me, but I'm hoping you'll have mercy on those two (and your readers) and give them a happy ending. Loving the updates and hoping for more!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! so good I was reading this at school when I shouldn't be!
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Reviewed By: My-Only-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 04:22 CDT
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Nice story, can't wait for the next one ^__~
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Title: Always love it!!
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really, love it! I read it first on AFF.net and yeah, under your other penname. I'm happy you are back although this fics that once where completed they're not now. Luv, Kagome's blood and imagine that you are revising it cause it's now uncompleted on AFF too. But, about sketches, wasn't it a bit longer, or with another chapter. Are you going to post the rest of it? It would be a pity if you don't but, that's up to you. Great job as usual!
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