| "Practical Medicine" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: mikkrueger On: December 30, 2008 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
all I can say is Naru needs a good spanking...nuff said.
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Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sort of new to Love Hina so...I can't say how far fetched it is (but from what I know it seems like a lot) I laughed when I read it and litterly fell out of my chair when I read that last part. Write more I'd like to see where it goes.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: killerman83ca [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2007 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read your story and I would like to know if you are going to finish it up becasue I would like to see how Naru reacts to Keitaro slapping her butt and calling him daddy.
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Reviewed By: pspmario On: October 31, 2007 13:49 CDT
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WTF I laughed my butt off this is hilarious. I want to read more of this story. This is just to good to be a oneshot.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha128b [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 03:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i almost died laughing at that, but there's a little bit of far-fetchedness to it....(a little hard to believe) esp. the part about motoko being bi... that's just not her... as for the spanking thing... I can only guess that to be your personal fetish as far as the reason it's in here..... don't get me wrong though, it's a good story
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Reviewed By: Flagman On: July 12, 2007 14:33 CDT
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Hey this isn't a bad idea though you would do well to research Psychiatry and also Japan's police and criminal justice system. In Japan criminal cases are presided over by a tribunal of judges.
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Reviewed By: Spartan429 On: June 30, 2007 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny as hell and extremely entertaining. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please hurry up with the update!
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Reviewed By: m64 On: May 26, 2007 00:22 CDT
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Personally, I liked what I read so far. Definitely humorous and made me laugh outright for most of the chapter. Looking forward to an update.
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Reviewed By: JWMA On: May 24, 2007 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
While it might be nice to see Keitaro get payback, this sort of idea is both overused and extremely over-simplified. And I have never met a single member of the psychiatric community that still uses the theory of penis envy.
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