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| "A Fulfilled Frienship and Unfulfilled Love" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: mystralwind [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love that pairing too Aww lol Baku really is Malik whooped, but thta's all good. It is as it should be.
| Title: MxB one shot
Reviewed By: mystralwind [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWW Fluffity goodness I am really enjoying your fic Oh, crap and can see your frustration in wanting to pair them up. It does soo have it's momentary angst attraction, doesn't it. LOL I can see, if you wanted, it turning into a conspire thingy. With each sleeping with the others, but you already padded that whole brother thing between the darks and lights.. Still, if you really wanted to, you could work around that to. It's great as it is though as well. I really don't have a lot of critique about your spelling or grammar. :P Ms Word does so much . lol mostly I look at the context and style. it is creative and flows well. Keep it up.
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