| "Born to Bear" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: tatyangel On: July 29, 2002 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
those chapters where really good.u have to continue writing.i wanna know what happens next.man but those chapters were awsome.so pretty preety please with sugar on top finish writing the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: jade On: July 14, 2002 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
u have gotta continue, it is sooooooooooo good.i really want to know what happens next.so please finish writing the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: ASHURA On: July 12, 2002 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY, ONNA
YOUR STORY RULES!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, 'CAUSE YOU'RE MAKING MY DAY! CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.
SEE YA |
Reviewed By: farennofmezzanotte [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2002 00:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, if you want to know when the next chapter is up without checking every day then give me your email address and I will email you for each new chapter.
Please take up the job offer, anybody!!!
Ja ne,
Faren-chan(the author) |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Very nice! I like the this chappie to but the end *winces* Um........That is possible but it would hurt especially the first time unless he did something to block out the pain a Saiya-jin thing maybe? Maybe Kaguya could interact with someof the other girls there, that would be awesome. I had a fantasy similar to your story once O_o. Okay way to much info. Gomen nasai. Bura-chan |
Reviewed By: mooncatz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 04:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
*waves* just wanted to say that i really like the story.
*moooncatz* |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2002 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! That has to be one of the best girl(realworld) to DBZ world type fanfic and gorl gets kidnapped by saiya-jin to mate her. XD You write really well to and keep up the great work! Bura-chan |
Reviewed By: nani On: June 12, 2002 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good.i really want to know what happened next,so please finish writing the next chapter.i don't like to be left hanging. |
Reviewed By: nani (again) On: June 18, 2002 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey,that was really good.hope u make the next chapter.i can't wait to read it. |
Reviewed By: Mikan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 00:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not a bad story. I like how you made Kaguya more of a fighter under bad conditions. You also do a nice job of explaining a Saiyan bond and how it is supposed to work. Though the whole 12-year-old sex thing makes me sick to my stomach.
Lessee, I also have a question about Renkon; why is he such an ass to Kaguya? She’s like his human sex toy, right? Don’t you think he should be a little nicer to his life-mate? *Wink wink* *Nudge nudge*
Also I know that Saiyans’ get horny around full moons but if Kenkon is Kaguya’s age I don’t think that would apply. I could be wrong, he does seem to be older than her? [How old is he?] Anyway, I’m sorry if I happened to affend you in any way in this review. [I didn't mean to..] I do like your story! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Ice Blade 120 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is tight.I can't wait till the next chapter |
