Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 20:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, it's not a story for everyone but I'm sure you know that. What it is, is very well written and extremely hot. The way you give the thoughts of them both involves the reader and draws you into the scene. It's nice that it's clearly consensual. Not that non-con fics don't have their place, but it's nice to have the participants agree occasionally. You really do a great job getting into Ni's head and setting the scene with his thoughts before moving to Kougaji and his side of it.
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