| "Hotel Takahashi" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: midnightair02 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2011 00:59 EDT
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I am very upset that you decided not to finish this story. You had a great idea and a great plot, so it's such a shame to see it go to waste. I hope someday you stumble back upon this story and decide to finish it. |
Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 12:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just realized the summary was a spin on the Winston Churchill quote xD Was he not awesome? I think I love this story more! Gonna re-read :) ~Am
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Reviewed By: kags13 On: April 13, 2009 13:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! update NOW!!!!!!!!!! Please and thank you.
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Reviewed By: lovelessxxdreamer15 On: June 12, 2008 02:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!! i just love....this story!!!!! everytime i read it i keep thinking there will be and update...but u havent :'( but my god!!! this is the best story i have every read!!!!!!!! keep up the good work and PLEASEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 22:47 EDT
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OMG i love this story!!! it has made my spring break better!!! lol well please please update soon I am having evil thoughts so yeah I need to no what happens before I explode lol
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Reviewed By: ~ME~ On: March 22, 2008 04:31 EDT
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OMG! that chapter was really good. but ya. I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LEFT OFF THERE!!!!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! i have this impending idea that now she's gonna find out she's pregnant... and i wanna know if i'm right so i can laugh my ass off like i did at the chapter. IT'S REALLY FREAKING AWESOME!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 03:54 EDT
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That was **HOT**,for your first lemon it was a doozy. Hey don't worry about being super filthy, sometimes it's the subtlties that get the imagination going. There's nothing wrong with getting rid of a little sexual frustration but with those two it's going to be like "jumping out of the frying pan and into he fire". Inuyasha is ust soooo cocky and Kagome is just soooo naive(at times) but it makes for such an intresting cocktail. Update soon puhweeeese!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 00:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loving th story...plz update soon
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Reviewed By: Ikichira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 18:45 EST
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(smiles) I hope I'm right in assuming you're British, correct? What captured my eye--subconsciously, of course, I'm too stupid to have caught this until one random day in school--was the title of the fic. It reminded me of one of my favorite British shows, Hotel Babylon, and I was thinking that maybe you'd loosely based your story from that. If not, it's still just as wonderful, I think. (wink) Don't stop writing!
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Reviewed By: Machiavellian_Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 01:58 EST
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gah! i cliff! im enticed! it had better so be inu hitting on her
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Reviewed By: CowgirlKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 03:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this chapter! it's so cute... and laid back! it's awesome!
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 18:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i never knew kags had it in her and i can't wait to see who is out on the balcony even though i already have a good idea who it is
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 14:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished the prologue and already I can tell this'll be interesting! Nice way to start!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 13:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haven't heard from you lately Keep it up
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Title: GASP lol
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 03:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it and I abolutely love the way you wrapped this whole chapter up! Please update soon...I bet that the "strong pair of arms" is our little dog eared cutie...Maybe? No? Yes? Well I guess Ima just have to suck it up and wait for the next chapter...*sigh* Update soon please!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: SailorEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 22:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love your story and the constant updates. i like that Kag and Inu have already known each other before now. is inu trying to win her heart back or is he just going to break it again? anyways, update soon please. i will be still online so i will be looking for the next chapter. thanks.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 21:17 EST
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Funny chapter. I particularly liked when Kagome and Sango beat the crap out of the guys in poker. A lot of men think they're so superior when it comes to games like that, simply because of their Y chromosomes. It was really fun to see some of the little sexists get what they had coming to them, lol. I'll be looking for the next update.
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Reviewed By: me On: November 19, 2007 16:31 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter. its been a while since you updated and you didn't dissapoint... well not me at least. hehehe. anyway. it was really good, and i hope you do indeed put more info on their past to tie things together, it makes it all flow better if you do. GREAT JOB!
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 21:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow long time no see well i glad u updated please write again soon
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Reviewed By: I'm Inulover1253 On: November 17, 2007 09:54 EST
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You haven't written for a while it is still Good Love ur story can't wait for an update Bye
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Reviewed By: Millicent_Hellix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 07:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. so far you made the characters like how they are in the anime. Even shippo, Kinda what I thought he'd be like when hes older. please continue. but you know whats weird, how you dont mind saying fuck, but you wont say ass and use arse insted...O.o lol ohwell, not like it matters. ^_^ great story, keep writting it!
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Title: update soon please
Reviewed By: redevil820 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 22:31 EST
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i love your story so far, pleasee please update soon!! && "my sister's keeper" is a great book
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Reviewed By: CowgirlKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 03:31 EDT
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great chapter, that last scene was hilarious. update soon! it's been over a month since you last updated!!!!!
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Title: Hotel Takahashi
Reviewed By: wale64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 16:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I obsolute ly love your story I am begging you to please write the next chapter as soon as possible I want to see what happens between Inuyasha and Kagome!!!!!!!!
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