| "Hotel Takahashi" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 21:04 EDT
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Oi,Inuyasha,Miroku and Kouga are such pigs. I can't believe they keep an actual record book for who they've f**ked, that is so chauvanistic. But it does make the story intresting so hey what the hell. Can't wait for Inuyasha and Kagome to meet up it's going to be one hell of a reunion. I'm real anti-smoking so ewww to Shippo and Sango for sucking on those death sticks. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: lildreamer6 On: June 16, 2007 18:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I wanna know whats gonna happen next, u made such a great/awesome storyline im dying in the suspense 2 know whats gonna happen. post asap please!!!
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Reviewed By: Unknown Person On: June 16, 2007 13:58 EDT
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Ooo, I can't wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 11:07 EDT
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woot! that should say it all =)
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Title: malitiadixie
Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 21:46 EDT
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Sounds good so far. I would like to see how it goes. Your writting flows very nicely. And I only found one mistake in grammar. That's a wonder in and of itself right there. (I'm kind of a spelling and grammar nazi.) I'll be waiting for the next chappie.
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Reviewed By: Kakashisgurly [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 22:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think i would have cried if that happened. Even after she was like LOL JK! I'd still be bawlling. ne way really great start.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 15:17 EDT
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Starting off well, so I hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 13:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool... write some more
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Title: Good job
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 09:19 EDT
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It was really good, I look forward to more chapters.
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Reviewed By: @__@ On: May 26, 2007 06:48 EDT
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I really like the prologue. And I am really getting into the story...PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 03:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, how am I gonna say this? Ooh I know: This is a very good fic so go on go on. I won't tolerate it if u stop. So just u go on
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Reviewed By: Love your story! On: May 26, 2007 03:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! The prologue was a bit cliche, but I loved your first "full" chapter. The ending scene with Kagura and the whole "yanking" your chain was hilarious. The emails were done quite nicely too; I loved the brother-sister exchange we get through them, even though Kagome and Souta have not actually interacted in the story as of yet. We get a really good sense of the type of annoying, yet lovable little brother-sister relationship those two have. But, poor Kagome, it's only her first day and things are not at all what they seem to be. I wonder if she'll punch someone out, Inuyasha *hint, hint,* before the week is over. Please update as soon as you can. I'll definitely be looking forward to it.
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