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| "Afternoon Delight" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 00:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, I absolutely HAD to read this fic when I saw the title, -- I am discovering more and more that I am not the only post-30s IY fanfic fan and writer. That song really takes me back. ^_~ That was a completely steamy lemon. I've thought several times that it's interesting that so few fics have any Inu/Kag anal sex or play in them. Of course, there's so much yaoi out there that I guess they figure Inu gets all he needs from his buds. LOL!! And I have yet to get my gumption up to write any, so my hat's off to you for letting Inu venture into uncharted territory. ^_^ Great lemon shot!
| Title: Mija
Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uuuugggh your killing me with sex! that was soo soo hot and diffrent, have yet to read a Kagome/Inu fic where he puts his finger in her rear while he takes her from behind, WOW, totally fanning myself here, it was great and I soo loved it, ty ty ty again for recommending it, whew its totally HOT in here lol, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)BTW Ive heard the song and I like it, but wow, I guess I never bothered to actually liten to the lyrics cause they are NAUGHTY! hehe, who would of thunk it lol
| Reviewed By: BaneOfSociety [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 14:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Loved it. One thing though, and I think this is just a formatting issue, the song lines are mushed together (what looks to be the end and start lines in the lyrics don't have spaces between the last word of one line and the first word of the next line). Other than that, a good job. And yay! You're back writing!
| Title: -grin-
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!! THAT WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
| Reviewed By: inufan625 nsi On: May 26, 2007 11:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
i liked it! it's good to have you back around again and i was looking forward to this. you certainly didn't disappoint!
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