Reviewed By: Peaches/Sammie On: May 29, 2007 15:43 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: Wow. The prolouge is certainly interesting. I like the way you incorperate the actual names of the demons inhabiting the abodes of the family members and give a "prescription" almost like a dr. It's very good. I think the story has a lot potential to build off of this prolouge and go far with it. But, I've got one question....What does UAC stand for? And whats up with mars? I didn't really get that. Anyways. Kudos for the style and creativity. I loved it! Can't wait to see the finished product.
