| "Cake" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Awesomeness
Reviewed By: Wynter-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 06:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is really good...I couldn't stop reading it and now it is 4:51 in the morning...
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angle666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 10:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. That's definatley intense. It's really good. Like, I can hardley stop reading, if it weren't for the eating and sleeping thing. Good job, cuz i'm soooooo lovin it.
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Title: >.
Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 23:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm on chapter 31 as of now... still loving the story but have decided to take a break to sleep x3. Can I just say I want to cut Marcus's head off? (As in, the not Armour one.) I got pissed too when he was wearing Armour's clothes, don't blame Xavier in the least xD. Old Marcus must come back. *pokes him.*
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Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 16:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
8D More. o.o.
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hole-E-Shit. I'm in love. This must be the greatest thing I've ever read o.o. God, I think I'm going to read it again after I finish this review. Your writing style is so amazing... I think something went wrong with the last three chapters, all the quotation marks are question marks...? Perhaps it's just my browser... Anyway, great ending, great plot, and above all great characters I think this is the first time I've ended up reading something and liking the personality of every single character. Beautiful! -Metalic (Pebbles56@gmail.com)
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