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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 12:42 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Sesshomaru is a mighty complicated persone. isint he? But atleast Naraku understands now! great chapetr like allways! and please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 11:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Dysfunctional relationship XP Sesshomaru always has such deep thoughts... anyway great chapter I am oh so curious as to how Naraku is going to make him understand.
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 18:16 CDT Comment/Review: LOL That was oh so funny! and by the wa I really dislike Naraku. Also that Koi captain reminds me of Jack Sparrow. Great chapter! sorry I hadent reviewed but i was on vacation and there was no internet.
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 20:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Now that was really sad
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 15:47 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: poor rin! hahaha
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 22:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Why must Naraku allways bring up teh argument about Sesshomaru not being a girl! I mean just live with it man! Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 16:05 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AWWW! Family fluff
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 18:28 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I am very mad at Naraku. He made poor Sesshomaru sad!
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 13:03 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OUCH! Now my leg hurts! Poor Sesshomaru getting cut off like that. Nevertheless, it was pretty funny. Here is my conclusion: When Naraku is away, havoc comes to stay.
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 00:47 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ha-ha in your face Sesshomaru! I speak Spanish fluently because its my first language! Ha! You aren't that perfect. Great chapter! And poor Sesshomaru he doesn't have any privacy ... Naraku really like Sesshomaru as a girl didn't he. Oh! You know what would be really cool! I in some way the twins walked in on Sesshomaru and Naraku. That would be so hilarious!
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 17:04 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: One of the things I love about you is the fact that you update so quickly! c= This story sounds really cool, and you have done a wonderfull job! Keep up the good work please!
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