| "Tale of the Twins" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
they are all gone?! the demons I mean... OMG it is a sad thought. I mean being the last of something everyone feared but now they dont think its real... sad... I think he should get himself a nice little mate so that his instincts to be dominiant will be sated. He will be able to see his parents and his sister that way too.
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh that was so sad! poor shuarra. I would feel abandoned to!
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Reviewed By: Sapphire 10 22 On: October 02, 2007 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww poor Seshsomaru and Naraku no mating until they get there! hahahaha poor poor them. Great chapter! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was kinda dull... well next to the other ones that is but it was ok. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So does this mean hes going to turn into a girl now? If so it would be kinda cool. I liked the whole Sesshomaru being a girl thing.
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ouchy! he felt the stich. I CRY EVEN WHEN I HAVE THAT ANASTICIA THINGD. sorry caps lock to lazy to write again. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH NO!!!! SESSHOMARU IS DYING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU CANT DO THAT!! MAKE NARAKU SAVE HIM OR SOMETHING!!
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh! poor kids! the cuting of the hair is just to cruel!
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good punishment! I salute you. Rin should have boyfriend but I cant really pictute rin in this story with one.
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
A bit of a boring chapter but a chapter none the less.
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshomaru is afolly demanding. Oh I loved your list! it was hillarious!
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so gross!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor Naraku. Good chapter though!
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter allthought I still cant belive that the argument is still there. Sorry I hadent reviewed but I am grounded with no internet so i only get on when ther is no one home.
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Reviewed By: Sapphire1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww I wanted to see Sesshomaru as a woman again, but oh well... Gret chapter and FINALLY the problem is solved!
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