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| "Forged Together" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: bb On: June 26, 2007 14:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
WARNING - Ch. 10 Contains scenes and references to RAPE and NON CONCENSUAL SEX [ncs] Unbe-fucking-livable! You ruined what could have been the best fic I have read in a very, very long time. Tsk, tsk, tsk... Please put a warning next time! After all not everyone in the world is a Masochist.
| Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 17:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love where this is going! I admit despite my super psychotic super fangirl powers didn't quite predict that. I can't wait to see how you will twist and turn all that angst between your brilliant characters so it would end up at the inevitable conclusion: hot dirty yaoi or in other words my dear boys finally seeing the advantages of polygamy. *evil smirk and a pathetic attempt at an evil expression complete with wiggling fingers and wide eyes* I'll be watching you! Kukukuku Btw I have this giggle-worthy vision of Duo and Quatre huddled in front of a computer looking at kinky gay porn and smoking..uh..happy herbs? *I am innocent I tell you!* The most important thing thought is for you to keep up the good work and know your fans are with you all the way! If you need some magic done to help with next chap give a holler! XD
| Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 16:49 EDT
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"...Heero would not have cared if they were running around naked with ostrich feathers up their butts as long as they completed their missions." Oh god! I couldn't help it I just HAD to give you the prize for this one (you choose your prize >.
| Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 05:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I just 'found' this fic yesterday and already its a favorite AND I got an update! I supremely enjoy your writing and plot and hope you'll keep up the tempo in both as well as posting. I am eager to see where Heero ends up. Any chance of a an 1x2x5? That would give it a nice twist and, I admit, probably have me squealing in glee :) And now the blackmail >.
| Reviewed By: MrChristie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 09:02 EDT
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Oh dear, it appears that I may be the only one reviewing. Regardless of that, I'm more than happy to. I like this story more with every chapter I read. The fact that you've kept the G-boys as teenage terrorists instead of turning them into a clique of angsty females is quite enjoyable. I find it really ruins a story when Quatre and Duo keep bursting into tears at the drop of a hat and for no apparent reason. It is as you said, Quatre may be compassionate, but he's still a killer. And as Wufei is my absolute favorite character, I'm so happy with how you've portrayed him! Sarcastic, quick-witted, honourable, strong, self-sufficent, determined, and hating to show weakness. It's my opinion that he's the most underestimated and underrated character in the whole fandom. Most people just give him a line or three about justice and maybe mention hating women and that's it. But that's only *if* they bother to include him at all. The dialogue and interactions between the characters also amuses me to no end. For some reason I find baiting, back-biting, sarcasm and sniping are far more indicative of romance than any amount of purple prose and soulful staring into each others eyes. (Perhaps this says something about my mental stability ^^) At any rate, all this was really supposed to say is 'Keep up the good work!' and perhaps 'Update soon, please!' I hope it gives you encouragement to write more because you are a very talented author, and I don't say that to many people. ~Mr.Christie
| Reviewed By: Stray [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 15:45 EDT
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hey! just came here to see how you're doing. Heh I see you did your homework. :D Btw, I'm writing this review because you left a comment (from me) in the text. Search for the brackets ([) to find it.
| Reviewed By: MrChristie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 03:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought I'd say how much I like this story. You do a good job with all the characters and how they interact with each other. I love the sarcasm and the sniping. I love that you've broken through the steroetypes, ie. Quatre always being pitiful and helpless (which he's not!) and Duo being the stupid loud-mouth (which he's also not), but that you've also kept some of the canon traits which make the boys who they are. I would love for you to continue writing this, as I am very curious to see where it is going. Hope to see more posts soon! ~Mr.christie
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