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| "Forged Together" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: snowdragon On: July 09, 2007 13:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I can't help but worry. If Heero and Duo are off together, might Heero not try something with Duo? I mean, he's been pretty agreeable to having sex with any of the other pilots...seems like he doesn't attach a lot of emotion to it. Yet. But, knowing Duo's past, I worry that Heero won't be, er, sensitive enough for poor Duo. Then again, he's been known to surprise me. Ah well. I guess I'll just have to wait for the next update to find out how things go with them. (So long as you keep Heero the hell away from Relena...that's all I ask.) ---snow
| Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 05:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Talk about a mess! Lol Do I smell some 2x1 lemony goodness? XD
| Reviewed By: MrChristie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 07:18 EDT
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More lovely 1x5! Are we going to learn more about what is motivating Heero? Because I, for one, am intrigued. Does he actually like Wufei or is it just a comfort thing? Is Duo going to fight Heero for Wufei, cause I almost think he would do much better with Quatre. Well, however it works out, keep writing, because I'm still reading!
| Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 08:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very interesting chap with a bit more of the 1x5 interaction while once again leaving me needing to know more about Heero.I love the depth you've given him and the humanity you've managed to intertwine with Wufei's hard character. Though I don't like seeing Duo hurt and hope you won't make him suffer too long. :)
| Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 05:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very emotional and a chap that left me with a fascination for Heero. As you say in your AN - but what about Duo? How will he react? Would he go back to his old motto of 'run and hide' or face his demons? And what about Trowa and Quatre? Will his blondness have to go hunting for him? 'Cause a Quatre in 'mission more' is scary! :D Once again - loved the chap and I simply can't wait for next one!
| Reviewed By: MrChristie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 03:37 EDT
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Well, me and my inner fangirl had to go fight it out bare-knuckled as to whether my review would contain anything like '*Sqeeeeeee* Hot Wufei and Heero boysmex!!' but since I won, this review should be somewhat more coherent. (But I suppose since it's in anyway, then it wasn't much of a win) Chapter 13 was wonderfully full of limey goodness and I feel it is my duty as a huge fan of anything and everything 1x5 to do everything in my power to make you write more. Including feeding carrots to your plot bunnies to make them grow big and strong and capable of taking over your brain to make you write more 1x5. And 2x5. And maybe even 1x2x5. Especially since you do it so well. That line at the end (I actually gasped as I read it) made me wonder if Duo isn't the only one to have a thing for Wuffers. Ok, so maybe my inner fangirl had a bit more of a hand in writing this review than I would have liked, but I suppose that shows how much I like the new Chapter in particular and this story in general. Keep up the good work, and I'm terribly sorry for another long review. ^^"
| Reviewed By: Random Chaos On: June 28, 2007 02:25 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I am enjoying how you are developing these characters. Instead of planting them into pre-molded ideas and forms, you are letting them develop from the original vague references and character designs. And making them work. Instead of the traditional fan-fic 3x4, I love how you start with a 1x3(fuckbuddy) and let things develop. They have to explain WHY they want to be together. Real people have problems, your characters have real problems. (I'm holding out for a threesome 2x5x1, I'm a happy-ending-for-everyone kind of gal)
| Reviewed By: MrChristie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 08:17 EDT
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I read the review by 'bb' and I just have to wonder how? How is the story ruined by a mention of a past traumatic experience by a character? I sincerely doubt the author included the mention of rape for it's own sake. The mentions of past rape and trauma do in fact have a pertinant relevance to the story and help move the plot forward. It provides yet another hurdle for two young men struggling to have a relationship to overcome. Even if it may not be the most inventive of pasts for Duo, it is nonetheless a believable one because it happens. Masochism and sadism have very little to do with it, especially from the victims point of view. One doesn't have to be a masochist to read it either (although I admit to being somewhat confused to the reference; masochists are people who like having pain inflicted on themselves and that doesn't make much sense in the context of reading mentions of rape). Another point to mention, I honestly hadn't noticed that the author hadn't posted any warnings; it didn't really seem necessary. After all, the story is rated 'T' for no one under 16. If a reader who is over 16 still can't deal with *mentions* of something as admittedly hideous as rape, then I've no idea how they will function in the real world. Because as horrible as it is, people get raped every day and ignoring it won't make it go away. At any rate, my opinion (as unwanted as it may be) is that 'bb' overreacted in proportion to the 'crime' and that if they had nothing constructive to say, then they should have at least said it with the need for swearing. Please keep up with the writing and I hope to see a new post out soon! ~Mr.Christie
| Reviewed By: bb On: June 26, 2007 14:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
WARNING - Ch. 10 Contains scenes and references to RAPE and NON CONCENSUAL SEX [ncs] Unbe-fucking-livable! You ruined what could have been the best fic I have read in a very, very long time. Tsk, tsk, tsk... Please put a warning next time! After all not everyone in the world is a Masochist.
| Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 17:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love where this is going! I admit despite my super psychotic super fangirl powers didn't quite predict that. I can't wait to see how you will twist and turn all that angst between your brilliant characters so it would end up at the inevitable conclusion: hot dirty yaoi or in other words my dear boys finally seeing the advantages of polygamy. *evil smirk and a pathetic attempt at an evil expression complete with wiggling fingers and wide eyes* I'll be watching you! Kukukuku Btw I have this giggle-worthy vision of Duo and Quatre huddled in front of a computer looking at kinky gay porn and smoking..uh..happy herbs? *I am innocent I tell you!* The most important thing thought is for you to keep up the good work and know your fans are with you all the way! If you need some magic done to help with next chap give a holler! XD
| Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 16:49 EDT
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"...Heero would not have cared if they were running around naked with ostrich feathers up their butts as long as they completed their missions." Oh god! I couldn't help it I just HAD to give you the prize for this one (you choose your prize >.
| Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 05:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I just 'found' this fic yesterday and already its a favorite AND I got an update! I supremely enjoy your writing and plot and hope you'll keep up the tempo in both as well as posting. I am eager to see where Heero ends up. Any chance of a an 1x2x5? That would give it a nice twist and, I admit, probably have me squealing in glee :) And now the blackmail >.
| Reviewed By: MrChristie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 09:02 EDT
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Oh dear, it appears that I may be the only one reviewing. Regardless of that, I'm more than happy to. I like this story more with every chapter I read. The fact that you've kept the G-boys as teenage terrorists instead of turning them into a clique of angsty females is quite enjoyable. I find it really ruins a story when Quatre and Duo keep bursting into tears at the drop of a hat and for no apparent reason. It is as you said, Quatre may be compassionate, but he's still a killer. And as Wufei is my absolute favorite character, I'm so happy with how you've portrayed him! Sarcastic, quick-witted, honourable, strong, self-sufficent, determined, and hating to show weakness. It's my opinion that he's the most underestimated and underrated character in the whole fandom. Most people just give him a line or three about justice and maybe mention hating women and that's it. But that's only *if* they bother to include him at all. The dialogue and interactions between the characters also amuses me to no end. For some reason I find baiting, back-biting, sarcasm and sniping are far more indicative of romance than any amount of purple prose and soulful staring into each others eyes. (Perhaps this says something about my mental stability ^^) At any rate, all this was really supposed to say is 'Keep up the good work!' and perhaps 'Update soon, please!' I hope it gives you encouragement to write more because you are a very talented author, and I don't say that to many people. ~Mr.Christie
| Reviewed By: Stray [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 15:45 EDT
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hey! just came here to see how you're doing. Heh I see you did your homework. :D Btw, I'm writing this review because you left a comment (from me) in the text. Search for the brackets ([) to find it.
| Reviewed By: MrChristie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 03:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought I'd say how much I like this story. You do a good job with all the characters and how they interact with each other. I love the sarcasm and the sniping. I love that you've broken through the steroetypes, ie. Quatre always being pitiful and helpless (which he's not!) and Duo being the stupid loud-mouth (which he's also not), but that you've also kept some of the canon traits which make the boys who they are. I would love for you to continue writing this, as I am very curious to see where it is going. Hope to see more posts soon! ~Mr.christie
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