| "You want it just as much as I do" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: Manna-Chan On: August 25, 2007 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so phucking funny...I literally almost choked and died when Iruka admitted that he was horny. LMFAO!!! And then when Gai came in LOL! SO PHUCKING FUNNY!!!! VERY GOOD!!! You should write more fanfiction like this one, it was awesome and a huge turn on! LOL
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Title: So GooD!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story such a turn on!
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Reviewed By: Itachis_Mistress_sprialk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this was an awesome yoai fan fic. Espcially the end where Gai walked in. I about choked I was laughing so hard. Horny rabbits....lol
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Reviewed By: darkness_is_beautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 07:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay first to comment on this story!! well anywayz i really like it! but you should keep on writing it'z really well written. --darkness_is_beautiful--
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