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| "Chocolate" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: I loved it!
Reviewed By: cody7799 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
20/10 on everything! Excuse me if my spelling is a little bad, but that story made me cum big time! the best I have read in a long time. Cant wait for more.
| Title: I enjoyed it! XD
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes yes, very smutty and nice. Trust me, there are worse lemons out there, and this one was pretty solid. Oh, love the touch with Xemnas--aka 'Mansex'--at the end. XD Good luck with writing more!
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