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| "Vindicated" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 18:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow this is kool, i enjoyed this very much hehe^^. I hope to read a new chapter soon. hope you up date soon.
| Reviewed By: Murder Junkie On: June 17, 2007 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're quite the writer! I've never seen the Organization approached from this direction; That in and of itself is impressive, seeing as how there are so many different stories based upon how they came together. I also like that it's not simply about shoving two pretty boys into bed together. Even a generous person couldn't call Xigbar pretty... Attractive, most certainly, but not pretty. It's more of a mature, wild appeal. He's almost a gunslinger, would be if he had a cowboy hat, and that is very, very hot. Perhaps his Somebody was a wild west man, before he became a nobody... Oh! Um, yes..! Please, keep writing! I simply must see how this plays out!
| Reviewed By: ScuzzyToast [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 22:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story makes me happy. :3 I try not to make too many observations on things like characterization based on just the first chapter, but my statement from before still stands: it remains highly appealing and I really like it! I wish I could put this story between two slices of bread and eat it. It's truly sandwich-worthy, and I mean that in a really good way. :)
| Reviewed By: ScuzzyToast [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 10:00 CDT
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Well, I'm hooked. :) The flow is very good, so it's an easy and enjoyable read. Even from the first chapter, the characterization seen so far is appealing and intriguing. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter, no doubt.
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