| "Breaking Point" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Destiny Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh. This chapter was really good!!! Naruto in the Akatsuki.... It makes it a lot more exciting!!! Please Update Soon!!!
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 14:54 CDT
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I was almost deterred from reading from you intro it seemed to graphic. But the story is good. Whish you could keep it on the tone it is now for you would have a lot of readers.
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Reviewed By: BabayBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooooo!!!! Sooooo Gooooood. Evil!Naruto, its almost like Sasuke never realized how much he liked normal naruto until he was gone with this one in his place. You never know what you have till you lost it...I must admit to having a certain fondness for the part where Itachi pulls Naruto real close and whispers in his ear the whole time staring at his brother...like "hehehe look what I have". It's like the tables have been turned. Naruto seems to always want to redeem Sasuke, no? Well now that Naruto is not wanting to redeam him, he will have to redeam Naruto. I also look forward for other moment where his brother get to rub into Sasuke's face that he has Naruto now...and boy does it seems like he really HAS him. He does HAVE him, ya? Well Hope you get a chance to update, and I will be ending this review because it is getting too long.
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Reviewed By: Angel of forgotten souls [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 09:05 CDT
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oh wow! This looks really good! I can't wait to see what happened to sasuke! Keep it going, this is very impressive! And that is alot coming from me, I can see alot of future in this fanfic! Please hurry with the next chapter, because it's so good i'll probably be checking like every 10 minutes, good luck!
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