| "It's my turn, mommy" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tayue On: December 08, 2007 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CUTE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was (for lack of a better word...) very cute & sugary sweet. I don't think most people would actually write this particular type of scenario even if we have all thought about it. I wanted to give you the full ten but something in the middle feels undone. I'm not sure what it is, exactly. It's has something to do with the part where his sees her again. The transition isn't smooth. It feels like a piece of the story was jumped, I think...Oh question! The misspelled words are because of the kids thoughts or are they just honest mistakes?Speaking of mistakes, hope I didn't make any in here....
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Reviewed By: Lonely~Soul On: July 20, 2007 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was just to cute
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: July 19, 2007 23:34 CDT
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That was so cute!!! I can just picture the both of them together, how adorable!
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CUUUUUTTTEE!!!! ^.^ For some reason it reminded me of this chibi gif i have of them.... http://s210.photobucket.com/albums/bb290/orkydork4/?action=view¤t =1704893966a4734709262m1.gif
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Reviewed By: cute fic On: July 19, 2007 13:58 CDT
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cute fic, but in the summary, you spelled fare, when I think it should be fair. Not sure. Lol, still, a good fic :P Keep up the good work ;P
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 00:35 CDT
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awwwww. that was so cute. it was also funny. i just luv how lil kids act, especially when it's kagome & inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sweet and cute!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kit48 On: June 20, 2007 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww!! that was so CUTE!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 07:59 CDT
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Now that was cute!
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 22:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
aw chibis!!!
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so KAWAII!
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Reviewed By: Jhetzel On: June 01, 2007 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's really cute.... but you need to work on your spelling mistakes... I really like it... ^.^
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Reviewed By: Wing Guardian [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 20:49 CDT
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I hate to use the term, but... that was cute!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: AnimeFreak=TrunksPan-Lover4evr On: May 31, 2007 19:13 CDT
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That was absolutely adorable lol. I just loved the last few sentences about the best... lol
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