| "Face Down" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 07:04 CDT
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this is interesting, i hope to read more soon
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Reviewed By: elwand On: August 15, 2007 17:17 CDT
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this has is amazing. please write more. i loved how u wrote about sesshomaru protecting kagome and the pack ideas are amazing. please please write more.i love it.
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 15:40 CDT
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OMG I loved it yet again!!! You HAVE to hurry!! Please update soon, I want to see Kagome eat raw meat!!!!
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Reviewed By: kitsunegirl48 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love this idea - cause its not like the ususal Kagome-leaves-Inuyasha-and-Sesshoumaru-pickes-her-up-and-takes-her-to-a-cas tle-where-they-fall-in-love scenario. Its got real Dog like dynamics - I mean the "pack" stuff (which by the way is really interesting) You've got a Wonderful start, so don't you dare Stop - Please Update Soon^_^ *Stamps* My new Favorite!
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 03:57 CDT
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That was so good!!! I can't wait for the next one!!! Please hurry!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Saekochan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 14:40 CDT
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You're spelling inu youkai wrong. Two words - Inu meaning dog and youkai meaning demon. Thus, inu youkai. Also, I'm very confused by the way the beta automatically expects Kagome to know EVERYTHING about inu youkai lifestyles. Sure, she would think she would know some things at first, but once the fact that Inuyasha really didnt act as most inu youkai would, then wouldnt she feel that maybe Kagome knows nothing and act as a teacher of sorts? Also, when adding honorifics to names, you put a dash in front of it. Kagome-chan. Sesshomaru-sama. Inuyasha-no-baka.
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 09:40 CDT
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OMIGOSH!!! I loved it so much!!!! I can't wait for your ne3xt chappie!!! please hurry and update like ASAP!!!!I'll be witing and watching!
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Title: such an amazing story so far ive loved it
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover161 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your an amazing writer what a great idea ive never read a story line like this one i think this one is truely an interesting master piece please update soon i will check back twice a day for any updates because you so rock i love this story it is so fasinating to me great creative and artistic ability may i add you surely are amazing ive never read any other that has such great creativity in it fanomial what a wonderful job im definetly adding you to my favorite authors and my favorite stories list im going to keep reviewing everytime you update this magnificent story so please hurry and update soon ill be checking back really soon for any new updates your rock your newest biggest fan *hugs you* *gives you props because of an amazing author you are there should be an higher rating i would give you a 100%*
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 00:51 CDT
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OMG....someone else knows Norse mythology?! My brother and I just argued about Loki....mainly because of Dogma....great chapter...I like the ranking system you set up!
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Despite the fact that you stole my idea for face down... I love it!
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 09:20 CDT
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UUUUUUWWWWWAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!! OMG YOu have to hurry and update again!!!!! I have never read a fanfic with a story line like this!!! I like it!!!! Please hurry! I'll be waiting and watching!!!!
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