| "Love Triangle" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: SEXY!
Reviewed By: snowforest On: July 26, 2007 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really really sexy!!! Your story was extremely hot and spicy, I could picture them well. But please add more describtion so it will be even better. Boah it was very, very arousing to read. I'm so sad you ended it so soon. Please update SOON. I'll definetely come back to check this wondeful and delicious fanfiction. -snowforest
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Reviewed By: DirEnGrey-Babe On: July 05, 2007 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lool, hey that´s the first Sailor Moon hentai fanfic, I´ve ever read and I´m totally amazed. Minako makes love with Rei. Hope, Mina will make love with Yaten, too. Hehe, hey update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: CirraxLnakrt On: June 21, 2007 05:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was very nice. Hioghly arousing, very well written, all around good. However, next time, please don't highlight the colours, it put me off when I read it, and interupted the mood. Otherwise, good story. Kepp it up.
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Reviewed By: *sAil aWaY* On: June 16, 2007 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually thought, Mina would do it/have sex/make love/f*ck with Yaten. And now she did it with Rei ^^. But I hope there will be a Yaten/Minako "love-special" xD You did a great job! Love it
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Reviewed By: Japanova On: June 09, 2007 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the second chapter. It always makes me shiver when I read, how Yaten watches Minako *rrrrr* xD "the seduction of venus" is sexy but I´m not a huge Minako/Rei fan, I love Minako and Yaten ^^. ^o^
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Reviewed By: Koana On: June 04, 2007 06:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woooow, never expected hot Rei/Minako sex like this! You are a very good writer. Very arousing. Please update more scenes with them, and some Yaten/Minako sex scenes,too. ;) Can´t wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kunzite [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like lesbian stories. xD I love how you described the way they do it. and I wanna read more, especially more Rei and Mina! muahahahaha
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