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 Reviewed By: Saiyan Prince1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 14, 2010 06:13 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
always hoping for more. umm yeah this one was good
 Reviewed By: kakasott [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 22, 2008 16:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
good start but needs improvement...make more research and don't hold back...
 Title: o.o
Reviewed By: RAW19 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 08, 2008 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
There was no actual sex scene, but i still highly enjoyed this fic. Especially the ending. Great Job!
 Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 20, 2007 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Not bad over all, just a start but this idea has promise. I think you should rated this Nc-17 and gone hentai but it's still enjoyable no matter what you do. I also agree Motoko should either join them, or perhaps corner Keitaro later. After hearing them rut together, she just can't get it out of her mind etc. I would love this fic to over all turn into Keitaro's harem hehe. IT wouldn't really take much after Motoko fell into Keitaro's arms for the rest the girls to follow, Su because she sleeps with motoko came in on them one night and decided to join.. Shinobu just because she loves him so much and perhaps Su talks her into it. Over all the only real problem I foresee is Naru, she would not react well at all. The logic of this fic has a little problem, I think it would taken a little more then breast to sway Keitaro he see's them alot, and Kitsune thrust them in his face enough. I would expected more of a kiss, or perhaps sticking a hand down his pants type of deal to sway Keitaro more. Over all I just hope this continues it's been a month or so since the last update and I can only hope that means your taking a longer chapter.
 Title: Make it M
Reviewed By: Kalis-nin  On: June 06, 2007 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I thought that this was perhaps the greatest fic that I have read in the history of my fan-ism of fiction I hope that you make it a hentai three-some between Kitsune/Keitaro/Motoko. I am so ready for an update and I really want this fic to be a series that has longer chaps.
 Title: Hmmmmm.....
Reviewed By: Tury [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 03, 2007 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like where this is headed. Very much so, I hope that you update soon.

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