| "Captured" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: jdbbrz [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2010 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was very riveting and whew thanks for sharing
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 14:40 CDT
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To answer your question; this is a very good one-shot. Like your other readers, it is good enough that I will do the unthinkable no-no and ask for more. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 07:30 CDT
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what happens next? why is sesshomaru doing this to inuyasha? is anybody looking for inuyasha? is inuyasha going to end up loving sess (weird and unlikely) or killing him self (new moon means he wont be able to heal so he can do it then) please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: josilin stafford On: June 21, 2007 22:37 CDT
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I really enjoyed your fic. If at all possible could you continue it?
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Reviewed By: yashamaru1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 20:11 CDT
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This was really good.. but it reminds me of the anime Ai No Kusabi.. but its still good.
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Title: hmm
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
a one-shot really. I could be much more than that. no one going to try to save Inuyasha? he's just going to be trapped? you did leave it open to write more. don't leave us hanging plz. write more.
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Reviewed By: kristaa123 On: June 05, 2007 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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Ok, you should write a seaquel to this story it rely mises some kind of ending. actuly this might be even the start for the longer story because idea is great and your writing style is wonderful. well that was my opinion.
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Reviewed By: cathappy:) On: June 03, 2007 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good i can see you making this into a good stroy or just leaving it as it is. I also sugest that you make it a little longer put some more detail into the story this will help keep your readers intrested. it is very good I hope for more.
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was hot. but why does sess want inuyasha? this is what the fic didnt explain. if this was pwp (porn without plot) then there would have been no need for the whole of inu's feelings. it would have been focused on the sex part of it. though inuyasha obviously enjoyed some of it, there wasnt much description of his feeling. anyway. if this was just a chapter, it began well. the next chapter will say how well you tell sess and inu's story. i hope you continue. i'd like to know why inu (is it to produce more inus, sess and inu being the only ones left?) and then how sess would now woo inu... you have sess as the seme, does this mean inu would be carrying the litter?
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Reviewed By: dresslikeinuyasha On: June 03, 2007 05:29 CDT
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eh, it was ok, but next time, i'd leave out the torture. personally i like the huggy, cuddley inucest, wher inu puts up a fight at first, but ends up enjoying himself later on. ^-^
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Title: wrong
Reviewed By: cassie06 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 00:11 CDT
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This was wrong!..on so many levels was it wrong. I don't think i have ever read something just so sad and provocative....but ehh..this was just weird. I feel bad for him.
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 19:10 CDT
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man poor Inu. That sux what is happening to him
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