| "My Family" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good beginning. Definately an interesting plot. Update soon
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 21:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is going to be a good story, i can tell. interesting plot, kind of disterbing if you say it "my great+ grandfather is in love with me, and he wont get with my grandma..." O.o lol hope you update soon! ~*OHS*~b
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Reviewed By: Aozora_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe, it seems really interesting so far ^_^. The plot caught my attention, so I thought I'd at least give it a try and I'm glad I did. I didn't see any misspellings, but I noticed that you left out a word in one of the sentences. I think it was when Inuyasha though "You don't know what you do to me" You left out the "you". Update soon though, I can't wait to see how this all plays out =]
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