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| "Five Hundred Miles in Penny Loafers" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Title: Oh my god.
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, more than I love your fanfics, I love the way you say things. Like "Snockered" "Horked" "ShlocK" and for the mother of all "So help me God, if I catch you driving ten miles an hour below the speed limit in the left lane, your ass is mine!" It is the true words of all normal American bred hot blooded woman. Hallelujah. You are my favorite. . .And I made a pointless membership thingy just to write to you how much I adore how you write. Hoo hah!
| Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
framing a comforter is deffently original snicker i luv the way u think
| Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, now I know how the whole "allergy season" trilogy began. ^___^ well done! I enjoyed this one-shot a lot because it had a little bit more plot and it was sweet/sensitive, and awesome. I need better adjectives. Anyways, I think your creativity is superlative; your style of writing is fun, and your grammar and spelling were tip-top, I didn't notice anything atrocious so well done on that as well. Fabulous job! Love Anubis!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, let me just say that I'm honored to have inadvertently inspired you during your vacation. I can just see you, glancing across the way at your window/mirror, suddenly thinking of the mirror scene that I had done, and busting out into a fit of giggles. If it were me, it would be more than mere giggles. I've had my fair share of suddenly exploding in roaring laughter, for no apparent reason, earning myself a fairly decent WTF? look from my own husband. I'm wondering why yours is pissed at you, though. *Frowns* If it's somehow my fault, tell him I said I'm sorry. Here, have him read this review. See honey, SplendentGoddess said she's sorry. Anyway, on to my actual review. I'm really glad that you wrote this prequel. It wasn't as though the trilogy truly needed it, but I'm just glad to see anything else by you because I love your stories. I could definitely tell the difference in approach, that while the first three were more or less PWP, and pretty darn good ones at that, they didn't really have much room beside all the slapstick silliness and whatnots for any serious relationship contemplation. Of course, that makes perfect sense considering that our favorite couple was already good and mated in the other stories, with all of that uncertainty nonsense already behind them. In this one, you managed to tackle the same issues anyone else would be faced with addressing, when it comes to the "first time" scenario between these two, yet you still managed to do it in wholly your own style. It was more serious than the first three, but still had plenty of funny slapstickiness, as well. Umm, is that a word? The minuscule play off of Twas the Night Before Christmas was unexpected, and made me laugh, and the bit immediately following that about "pull-strings" was even better, but I think my favorite for the day is definitely "logic versus erection."
| Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was wonderful! Such detail. Funny and erotic. I LMAO when I read Inu wanted to KEEP THE COMFORTER! OMG hysterical. Please another one shot, that was great. I think I loved it more than alergy season. TERRIFIC, STUPENDOUS! Keep up the awesome work. I'll be waiting for more!!!
| Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 05:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was brillant! Bloomin' Brillant! I love the way Inuyasha took over and the mentioning of Kagome's new teddy sailing past her field of vision was too funny! And that was an awesome new twist!! I don't think I ever come across them in front of a mirror before! Kudos! Thank you for the lovely hot and steamy smexy lovin'! I thought it was really adorable how Inuyasha was protective and sentimental about the comforter! Too cute! I think they will never ever get a dull moment in their life together! This is a delightful pre-quel to the series and thank you so much for sharing. Please keep up the great work! Looking forward to seeing more!
| Reviewed By: NonWritten [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 04:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so funny... well written
| Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 03:51 CDT
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There's love and there's love and there's desire. Or, in this case, all of the before mentioned. This is written for the real fanfiction lovers and Inuyasha-breathers I can tell, because you've alluded on some facts more that straight out written them out. This is an esoteric erotic story for Inuyasha-fans (and fans of you) and I believe that must be said to be a good outcome of your strange experiences lately. May your further travels come out in a similar manner! I'll be reading you.
| Reviewed By: Nokomarie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 03:04 CDT
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That was hysterical. Of course, why are you on a boat and what would everyone think if they knew what you were writing?
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