| "Heavenly Injustice" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2009 19:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a good storry i have read it twice i thought you would have updated by now you should. It's a really nice set up.
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Reviewed By: SATERN On: February 08, 2009 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG UPDATE THIS!!! it's amazing!
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: ShadowRealm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 08:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. You should update. I want to see what happens when the demons come out. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: envy hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it! the very beging was excellent! and it was like that 'till the very end I hope you continue writing this 'cause it is very good
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 29, 2007 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally sanged my intrest, so far this has some real potential and I cant wait to see where you go with it ;p
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: amazing On: June 16, 2007 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD! THIS IS VERY GOOD!
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Reviewed By: Shamise [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: lo On: June 06, 2007 11:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a little better. If you don't want to get a BETA you need to proof read at least twice. This could be a good story. It just needs a little more effort.
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Reviewed By: DragonAngel of Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 19:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story!! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: lo On: June 05, 2007 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
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I am really surprised at chapter 1. The grammarical errors and the rushed feel of the chapter did not help. I think that a BETA would really help you. This story has the potential to be fun.
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Reviewed By: lo On: June 05, 2007 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great prologue, that really grabbed my attention. THis seems like it has the potential to be a good story.
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Reviewed By: MiyAsuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 20:25 CDT
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That prologue was very good. I really look forward to the next chapters.
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