| "Shinji The Harem King" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: demonevangelion On: July 18, 2007 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad, i can see this will turn out well. the only thing that needs working on are the grammer and sentence errors. other than that i really liked the first chapter.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: EVA-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 09:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, now you made my curiosity to rise above bearable. Now you have to update this, so I can sleep peacefully. And hopefully you update the Sex Days soon.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 09:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not one of my favorite starts, though the premise is good. A bit awkward in reading this. Hope this goes somewhere! dennisud
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Reviewed By: Wendigo On: June 05, 2007 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short and a good beginning as long as you continue it then this will be almost or better then Sex days
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Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are off to a good start and the plot looks good too. I can't wait to read the chapter to this story. Please update soon.
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