| "Mistakes Are Ours To Make" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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read your story on aff.net... hope you update here as well on mediaminer.org... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: ruinosekai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 01:10 CDT
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pls...pls...pls... update soon pls.... pls.......
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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can't wait for the other chapters... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 01:54 CDT
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looking forward to your upcoming chapters... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Tweak [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 08:55 CDT
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sooo cute!! write more as soon as u find the time!!
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Reviewed By: XxDemonic_PrincessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww I love this story! It's so cute! Please update soon I would've given you a higher rating but it only goes up to ten! :( Well hope to see an update from you soon! This story is wonderful! ~DP
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Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 15:59 CDT
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hey this is pretty good so far can't wait to find out what happens next time peace out
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Great story. The scenario you've drawn here is very interesting. I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 23:22 CDT
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yay a new story for me to be around from the beginning. I really like the first two chapters, so i do hope you will update soon. I also really like the name Miyoko.. lol it sounds like a mangled version of Miroku's name. :) Keep writing, and i'll keep reading.
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Reviewed By: Aozora_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far! It's got my interest peaked highly. I think I would have beaten him into a bloddy pulp. The nerve for him to ask her to marry him. Responsibility. pfft. And yet, I know that this is all from your mind, but it seems real at the same time, lol. Great Job! I hope you update soon. I really want to know what happens next =] Ao.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 11:17 CDT
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slap him, slap him, slap him! okay, seriously though, i love how you're setting this up. but what a way to propose marraige. a responsibility. does that mean he'll not sleep around? does he expect to sleep with kagome? oh this could be so much fun.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 00:04 CDT
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interesting story... very nice... please update soon... maybe have Kagome suggest her and Inuyasha stay together on a trial basis before they she decides to marry him?... just a suggestion...
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