| "Spells, Charms, and... Babies? Oh My!" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Kaedye On: May 06, 2008 20:05 CDT
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I enjoy your fic i love to help writers better themselves so i hope you wont mind a little constructive critisism. Nothing in this is bad, I promise. I love the story line you have going here and the fact that you pretty much have the characters right. (That is one of my pet peeves lol.) Ron is a little mushy though but to eaach his own ya kno? My suggestion is to make the chapters a little longer? I think you were going for the cliffhanger effect, which is good, but when you just get into the chapter and its over its disappointing. I hope im not sounding to overbearing or whatever I just hope i helped... Im looking forward to later chapters. p.s. please dont think im hypocrite by having extremly bad grammar in this paragraph im in a hurry...
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Reviewed By: dantes_inferno [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's fanatastic! please write more, i want to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: catherine! On: August 15, 2007 07:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha awh thats brilliant!!! love it! update asap!! mwah!
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Title: Spells charms and babies oh my!
Reviewed By: kittymeow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought it was hilarious!the entire thing! keep up the work!
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Reviewed By: fanficmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 15:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice. IT WAS ABOUT DAMN TIME!!!
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Reviewed By: Mystic13135 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very funny, love it!
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Reviewed By: LostInSiberia_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 07:23 CDT
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Haha, Voldemort... =] Very enjoyable and cute, can't wait for more.
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