| "Trial and Judgement" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Ryan_Nightshroud On: November 24, 2007 23:11 CST
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hey this me...DarkNEvil...sorry for not updating in like...forever!!!! i been having writer's block...and school has been getting in the way...but I will try an update as soon as possible...i promise
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Reviewed By: Chantel On: September 03, 2007 16:57 CDT
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Suddenly i see! this is what i wanna be!! sorry i was listening to KT Tunstall but yeah good chapter i did spot a few errors but you are proof reading so thats cool^^ i should prolly shut up and read my own work... but yeah i cant wait for more its getting interesting! yayness!
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Reviewed By: DarkNEvil [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 11:34 CDT
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Sorry it took me so long to update. I had to proof read it over and then use microsoft word at my school to correct the errors...lmao...So yeah the next chapter will be up before the middle of next month...>.>...That's if school don't get in my way..u.u
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Title: Well Done
Reviewed By: lil lovely angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. I'm liking this story very much and hopefully you'll update. As a writer to writer, a few words of advice. one, it's ok that you don't have microsoft word to fix your mistakes. Read over your work and make your corrections. Second, two reviews is all right. When i first started out, i didn't get anything. I'm positive if you continue your story ppl will read and leave comments. Hell i did it. hahaha! continue the story ok?
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Title: eh
Reviewed By: .... On: June 15, 2007 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like
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Reviewed By: (Emily) On: June 06, 2007 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, This fanfic is quite interesting! Only, it does have quite a lot of faults :( .. To be bold, your grammer very bad...bad grammer makes it look like you didn't put a lot of thought in your writing, which makes a not-so-interesting piece. Next time, remember that PROOFREADING is your BEST FRIEND! :) Otherwise, keep up the good work, and please tell me when you get the next chapter up!!!
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