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| "Bloodlines and Fox Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: anpnymous On: August 06, 2008 12:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
pretty good story please write more so i can read. though the water/ice thing you actually got it wrong it would be water alone and the way to get ice is by combining wind and water
| Reviewed By: Trife [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I look foward to the next chapter please update soon.
| Reviewed By: Wither [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool,please upload soon.
| Title: cool
Reviewed By: DemanFox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more i would like to know what happens next
| Reviewed By: Vampiress_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI!!!!! Lol I'm reviewing your fic, it's freakin awsome! I can't wait until u update next, of cousre i could bug you until u do next lol. well i luved it and can't wait until u update! BYE SHORTIE! Luv Jay. Hey hun, luved the fic can't wait until u update next I can't believe i read this with this twit next to me. *flicks Jay* well keep up the good work and I'll review u once again when u update. Luv ya! T
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 01:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Personally, I think this story has some real possibilities. Not sound negative, but my only beef is that your grammar at times looks confusing, and you're writing style needs work. Things I need help with myself. Other than that, which is something that is solved by just writing more, I think this fic rocks. Still, if you want someone to take a look at your work, and act as a Beta, a pre-reader or editor if you will, I offer my services. So, I like this fic. But it needs editing. Still, I love the ideas (demon eyes, seems like the black haired guy's eyes in Getbackers) and the explosive touch reminds me of Karasou from Yu Yu Hakushou. Neh, it's a neat idea. And I liek the Uzumaki fighting style. Naruto isn't overpowered, but he could if he works for it. I can't wait to see where this story goes. So, later.
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