| "Say the Words" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Icing123 On: May 08, 2011 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your style of writing and flow, many young Arthur tend to suck . Although this a a realistic issue between Bulma and Vegeta, I just can't see Vegeta having feelings of love . He a proud, arrogant, cold Prince. Although he gave his life for her during the Buu saga at one point during the cell saga he was going to allow Bulma and baby Trunk's craft to crash. I don't say this to be and ass this a good fic I say this to give you honest feedback. |
Reviewed By: luna18 On: July 15, 2007 08:03 EDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is great I love it. Thanks for sharing it with us. I love all your fics about BV.
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Reviewed By: Vindicated On: June 18, 2007 09:03 EDT
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This fic is amazing. please post the next chappy soon!
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Title: Aw!
Reviewed By: Crazy Ash (Not Logged In) On: June 17, 2007 06:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, please update soon! This story is so sweet! I can't wait for the next chapters!!
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Reviewed By: luna18 On: June 14, 2007 01:57 EDT
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It is a great story. Poor Bulma she thinks Vegeta doesnot love her but she is wrong. Every woman wants to hear the three magic words I hope Vegeta can say the three words to Bulma soon or did Bulma heard the conversation between Goku and Vegeta? Sorry my English is not good.
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