| "The Dragon Cards" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: rissybabe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 05:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should keep going on this
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Title: you asked me to review ^_^
Reviewed By: cardcaptor-elmo-doodle [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the beginning of this story. it's got me intruiged and curious about what eriol will be up to next! i just hav one incy-wincy tip: you should take a new line for each new speaker. i noticed that you had sakura talking and then kero talking on the same line. it can be a little ocnfusing when trying to figure out who the speaker is. keep writing!!
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Title: Waiting
Reviewed By: True Finder [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 03:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This first chapter is a little boring, as nothing much happens, exactly. But there was a mystery ending, so maybe it'll get better later on
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