| "Tasting Bliss" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: kakorina son On: April 04, 2013 22:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the reason I rated this like I did ws just va few errors but exciting and loving how you made vegeta and goku so understanding im on fanfiction as XxKakorinaGoku'sTwinXx love this story look forward to reading a sequel if there is one |
Reviewed By: lord_of_the_pies [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 18:44 EDT
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Awesome seeing a bit of SS3 Goku in this. The form combination at the end end of chap 13 was very sexy. The progression of their relationship has worked nicely in the last several chapters, in particular how Vegeta has developed in it; he is seeming much more at ease with Goku.
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Reviewed By: Zofo On: January 24, 2008 20:51 EST
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I'm loving the amount of ss4 in this story, I don't read enough of it and they are so feral and sexy like that.
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Reviewed By: Zofo On: December 05, 2007 16:54 EST
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I've been following this one for some time but forgot to review. Shame on me as it is such a good fic. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Firefly01 On: September 16, 2007 22:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chapter ^.^ I'm glad to see you writing DBZ fics because you're so very good at it! Have you posted this at aff.net? You'd probably get more reviews there. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Oujosama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 21:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've enjoyed this very much so far. Can't wait for the update.
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Title: Enjoying so far
Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: August 03, 2007 20:04 EDT
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Just found this, and I do like it so far. In particular the relationship between Vegeta and Goku, and can't wait to see how it progresses. You also pressed a few buttons with the SS4, it is nice to see that used now and then. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonTide On: August 01, 2007 18:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really are being robbed here with the lack of reviews. Lazy readers >.<
I had quite a few chapters to catch up on, but I loved each one! The last chapter was fantastic. You kept both Goku and Vegeta in such perfect character throughout the entire ordeal. That's certainly NOT an easy thing to do ^.^ I look forward to the next chapter! Excellent work!
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Reviewed By: CrimsonTide (Rourinu) On: July 01, 2007 16:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful fic! You did a fantastic job with both characters and I LOVE that they were both in their SSJ4 forms. Excellent work :)
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Reviewed By: gokuspasm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me love s this fic!!! I want t oadd it but first i need figure out how to do so.... lol well sorry f or the late review....
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