| "Darkened Hopes" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: ladybird2223 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 22:23 CST
Comment/Review:
oh this is so f*cking awsome. great idea. love it. update soon. emperor tk is going down baby! i agree though with the others who have reviewed on it being better if it was in story format. but it doesn't bother me so much because i've read so many of them like this. |
Reviewed By: Mastero [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 14:19 CST
Comment/Review:
A nice origional idea. Although how did Dasiuke\Davis get the Digimetal of Miracles back?
Making Etemon Jun's digimon was funny. By the way Etemon is an Ultamate and Metaletemon is a Mega.
It would also be better to put this in story formate. It's easier to understand.
I actully think Daisuke would have the crest of Miracles because the two other holy symbles (Light and Hope) had the same person for the crest and digimetal but this is just my speculation. |
Reviewed By: Reveiw On: August 01, 2002 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like most other critics i find this story.... interesting. The style of writing is less profeshinal then i hoped but is a good storie none the less. This fic sticks to the show very well. Please write more. |
Reviewed By: Mega Dude On: June 17, 2002 09:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story! Keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: Firebird157 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an intriguing idea and I do like it but I find script form fics visually annoying and hard to read. I much prefer narrative form. Not so much that I won't the next part but it is why I gave it the bottom score on style of writing. It also lowered the Enjoyment factor. I would love to see a narrative version of this sometime. |
