| "The Deal" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: very awesome
Reviewed By: fanficmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 14:34 CDT
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This is getting very good! but mine are still better than yours.
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Reviewed By: *starfall* On: August 20, 2007 23:44 CDT
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OMG i love this fic it's so awsome!! update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Bev On: August 20, 2007 17:45 CDT
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I love it!!!! Write more soon!!! I'm waiting. Your chapters are short. :(
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Reviewed By: Kandy K [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 03:25 CDT
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This is friggin awesome! Update already! Please read my fic, LoZ:A New Beginning Kisses KK
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Reviewed By: fanficmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 18:20 CDT
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NICE JOB! Kinda of short but still good!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chap, although i think you should make you'r chap's longer. Well it's just my opinion. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!! YOU'R AWESOME!!!!
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Reviewed By: fanficmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 18:10 CDT
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THIS ROCKS ASS!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked you'r story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! YOU ROCK!
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Reviewed By: goldeninusama On: June 13, 2007 15:48 CDT
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This might be a nice story, if it was written as a story. This is written more like a transcript. Where's the narrative part? And the way you write the conversations, are we supposed to make our own deductions of the emotions they are being said in?
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Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 16:13 CDT
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hey this is sounding pretty good can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter
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