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| "Sonic Adventure 2: The ARK Incident" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Shadow 6271 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 08:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And its Chapter 3: Awww you didnt show Sonic's and Shadow's first encounter. I hope you do it well cos i love that. "Theres no time to play games" just sends chills up my back. still, i like the way you did it this time, with him in the middle of a restaurant, still trying to eat chillidogs. and after all that, all he can think about is how much Amy is gonna kill him? but the absolute BEST bit is how you make fun of the original song, it was a bit cringe worthy. well, all in all that was a well done enjoyable chapter, and about you end notes - yes, i noticed how much of a rip his hover shoes were as well.
| Reviewed By: Shadow 6271 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 2: Racial Slur? okey dokey then, i doubt the good Doctor woul even have that on his mind ^^. Wow, i like Shadow's description, i never get that damn thing right! and he actually killed the guy! YES!! too many adapts just have the guy crawling away, good to see the guy didnt survive. and the immortality, very good. some people forget about that (my fictions have yet to introduce it but they will). now, i wont say much about the Knuckles Rouge thing because it was basicly just an exact adapt, but it was done well and with detail. other than that, good chapter. do more! ^^
| Reviewed By: Shadow 6271 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 1:oooh, very well done. not as dark as id make it but hell- its your fiction and it seems to be working fine. very well described too, you certainly dont skip over anything. and i like the way you portrayed the Doctor, i.e. well. he just doenst seem to get shown very well usually and its refreshing to see that you have him doing things right but keeping that almost cheerfulness that he has. one minor complaint, i dont see Eggman swearing, it just kinda seems off when he does it. besides that it was a good chapter ^^
| Title: email
Reviewed By: Shadow 6271 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 10:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
listen, i know you emailed me but i cant actually read it cos of temporary problems so i apoligise that i cant reply straight away, which i pretty much always do when someone has taken the time to read my review and actually respond (i hate it when people dont respond to reviews!) talk to you later ^^
| Reviewed By: Shadow 6271 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeyness! i love SA2 adapts and i will be watching this with interest. its a very good setting of the scene and im glad that you arent afraid to put a little humour in here. i wonder, will you go off the trail a bit and be slightly more inventive or stay to the stuck plot? hope you update soon....
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