| "Upon Broken Wings" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 11:33 CDT
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Great story so far, can't wait to read more on this. Wonder what Naraku has come up with, and will Souta be able to start traveling back and forth for now on??? Please update soon
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... glad that kagome is fine... hope she'll be able to walk better... hope that when kagome & souta go back through the well inuyasha goes with them... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: dogdemon2592 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, what can i say you read my story so i'm returning the favor. This is a nice story I can't wait until the next chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really enjoyed reading you'r story it was very well written. I LOVED IT!!! can't wait to see what happens next.PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!YOU ROCK!
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Reviewed By: AnimeHuntress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Way to go! Kagome's not a wimp but she's still in character. Have you read the manga? She's a bit stonger in that then the anime. The only real time she show's strength in the anime is when their following the Manga. Anyways I like you story so far and can't wait for an update. Is souta going to be able to go home? What will her mother and granfather think? Is Naraku going to find out? Please don't pay head to these queastions as they are only random thoughts I had while reading your story. I just enjoyed your story and would love to see you right more.
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Reviewed By: LostInSiberia_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 18:44 CDT
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Ooh, this is very interesting and well written. The characters are very in-character, and I love the new twi st with Souta being back in the Sengoku Jidai. Update soon, Yume-chan. =]
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Reviewed By: bookworm810 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 22:43 CDT
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Ok, you've offically got my attention. This is a very interesting begining. Now you've just got to continue it. Please update soon, I can't wait to read more.
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