| ".:Pressure:." Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: creampuff819 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2010 20:11 CDT
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I WANT MORE CHAPTERS!!!!
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Title: so cute
Reviewed By: CowgirlKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a cute story, and i love how hojo went crazy in the 5th chapter. it says you haven't updated in a while though, but i think you really should. its a great story and i'd really like to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: Neko77 On: July 22, 2007 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!! I really like your story and thanks for the new chapters, i really hope you update soon!!!!!
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Title: Author
Reviewed By: tadahiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 22:27 CDT
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Yeah, I had two chapters donw but I'm re-writing them. They weren't right
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 00:37 CDT
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Sorry to knit pick, but...I would have to agree with Precious. Why would kags Mom leave for a whole month? And take her brother out of school for a month. Not plasable. Why would a mother leave for a month to go to a wedding. Besides that, I love your story so far. Their relationship is coming along nicely. Thanks for the 2 chapters. I really appreciate it. Keep up the great work. Update soon, PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 17:19 CDT
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That chapter was nice but like before I have two problems with it. One, how could he walk her home if she drove? Doesn't she usually pick up Sango? So she had to take her home too right? And two, why would they take Sota too? Any particular reason why they see fit to leave her and not him? But other than that it was pretty good. You might be pushing them together to fast though. You might write yourself in a corner. Although maybe you have something else in mind for the many plot of your story. I know it sounds like all I'm doing is pointing out all your faults but I do like this story. Thanks for slaving to give us another update but take your time. It's not a race. Just don't leave us hang for months, ne?
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Reviewed By: Palmerdreams [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 03:45 CDT
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wow, yay! Two Chapters in one day. I'm so happy thanks for doing that. I love the plot line and the pace that the story is progressing. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read the rest of it.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol that was good, caint wait to read more
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Reviewed By: Porcelain_Baby_Doll09 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really been enjoying this story so far...I just wish the chapters were a little longer...oh well though...the plot is still really good!!! please write more soon
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Reviewed By: Palmerdreams [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading your story from the beginning, this is just my first review to you. I just wanted to say ould you please put a new chapter up? It would be greatly appreciated.
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found you story and it is coming along nicely. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 09:56 CDT
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Well I'm going to start off by saying that I KNOW I reviewed this story already but for some reason it isn't here at all. *sighs* And I was the only review so it was easy to remember that I did. I don't like repeating myself much so I believe I commented on his dad being the principle, How I hope that you are able to make this story a good one and etc. Anyway I have a problem with this chapter. I thought she was captain of the volleyball team? In this one you say she and Hojo are captains of the tennis team. Which is it? I want to say something about the length of this chapter but I know how it is sometimes. That's what came out so that is what you posted. I'll be looking out for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like where your going with this...anyways...are inuyasha and the princeple related? (same last name)...updatesoon...or i shall come find u....
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