| "Slight Problem" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: meow-chi On: April 28, 2009 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi there!! you seem to be a really good writer please continue your work i'm looking forward to it wish you all the best!!
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Reviewed By: sakura sanada On: April 27, 2009 06:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic, i just read it recently and i fell for it please do continue this story i'm really looking forward for the next chapters... more power to you and keep up the good work and oh, let's keep in touch you can mail me at kitsune_no_baka@yahoo.com GOD BLESS!!
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Reviewed By: Kurisuti Kamae On: September 14, 2008 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, I really think you are an extremely talented writer. THis is one of the most realistic and yet creative and interesting stories with added personal characters I have read. I must say Hiei is falling a bit out of character with the last two chapters (apology + comforting) and Kurama seems to be warming up to Lisa quicker than expected. Both the demons are much more complex and probably would cause the girls a lot more confusion, frustration, and pain before they actually returned their feelings. Nevertheless, I like the overall realistic nature of the story and think you did a great job. Plz keep writing. If you don't have many reviews its because ppl. tend to be narrow-minded with added characters' stories but if you keep writing, the reviews will slowly increase and then speed up as more and more resenters of such stories will figure its worth giving a try with as many reiews as it is getting. Anyways keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: jen9 On: June 21, 2007 18:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is fantastic! and you got Hiei to appolgise! keep writing! in fact be writing right now! now start writing! come on you know you want to!!! xox
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Reviewed By: dark_angel_of_death9 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i rly like this keep writing plz!
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