| "Haunted" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 08:05 CST
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this is a great story, i cant wait to find out what yusuke bought for kagome. i havent read/watched yu yu very much but by what i've learned from other fanfics isnt yusuke one of the lords? and arent kurama and hiei heirs to some of the lords?
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 11:36 CDT
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this is a great story, please update it soon
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 10:45 CDT
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this is a great story, please update it soon
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Title: write new chapters
Reviewed By: kayna4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please start writing more on this sotry .I really love this story a lot.
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Reviewed By: a_MikoS_heartache [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 05:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! this is really good i love it keep it up i cant wait 2 tha next chapter
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Title: I love it!!!!
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Kagome_lover_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome it is so cool!!!!I like it alot...Ok...Now that I'm hooked thanks alot...jk...Just hope that you put up some more Chapters...Talk to you later...Buh...Bye!!!
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Title: Uh oh! O.o
Reviewed By: SesshysMate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome. And the marriage thing is a recipe for anger issues and fights...I can't wait!!! Update soon! Ja ne. =^_^=
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Reviewed By: kayna4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 21:57 CDT
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Please update I enjoy reading this story. I love these type of pairings.
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 01:10 CDT
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Well the plot's good, you have a lot of where/were errors & similar though & the Otology meaning father thing is totally wrong, Otology is the study and medical care of the ear. Otou means father in Japanese, I think. Hope this helps.
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 18:26 CDT
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also just so ya know, you'd end up getting a lot more reviews if you make it open to where everyone can review. :)
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...love it ^^ i like Yus/Kag stories. you never see enough of them :) but i like how your going along with the story so far. also what's Keiko's role? i know that's not the last of your use for her :) heh but yeah i love to see an ass kicking kagome :) this will be awesome. i love yourt fic so far and i can't wait till u update ^_^ so will Kurama have a pairing? or are you thinking of suqeezing him in with Yus and kag ^_~ lol that always a fun threeway. and when is Hiei gonna stop bein an ass? oh well i guess we'll find out when u update ^_^ ja ne!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 07:25 CDT
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AhHH!!!! Update! Update!!
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Title: Holy Cow!!!!
Reviewed By: ihatepurplemonkeys [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story! please update soon! Cant wait! :D
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 12:43 CDT
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I really loved it! Great work. Keep it all up and update asap please! :D
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 11:05 CDT
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WHEN do we find out what INUBAKA did?!
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Reviewed By: crystal lilith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 05:53 CDT
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Wah...Kagome major mood swings...haha, I just found the whole ordeal amusing especially Sesshoumaru's silent wonderment towards Kagome's display of anger. huh, she seriously needs to learn to control her emotions especially when it's putting or potential will end up harming bystanders and those she holds dear to her. In the long run she's not only hurting other but herself greatly as well...All-in-all I liked the chapter.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 04:12 CDT
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I Love this please update soon
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 14:10 CDT
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I really loved it! Great work! Update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: Hime-Jun-Hi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 12:54 CDT
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HE isn't there.... is he?
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Reviewed By: crystal lilith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 05:08 CDT
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haha...your comment at the end of chapter 2 made me crack up. I didn't intend on you taking my review on the Keiko's behavior seriously...I just found that her arrogant demeanor just doesn't rub me the right way... As for Yusuke and Kagome's interaction in the dojo. I really liked it...in a sense it was quite comforting and at ease to read. hm, I'm surprised that Kagome didn't get mad when Koenma stated that Genkai desires Kagome to partake in SD's missions and to join the team without discussing or with her consent. Just out of curiosity, is Yusuke the only one who's interested in Kagome as of now and most possibly end up being paired with her as well?! Oo, and what's up with all the blushing Kagome's been doing...*shrugs* I just think that she has been blushing too easily and too much.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 22:23 CDT
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I really loved it! I think Kagome should be the one to smack kieko around some! I also think that you should some how bring Sessomaru into the story. But in the end it is up to you! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 20:38 CDT
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it was soo good. very little of ooc in yusuke but barely noticible i loved it!! xD hop eyou update soon xD!
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 20:38 CDT
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WHEN do we find out what INUBAKA did?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 11:05 CDT
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Good job. Keep it up. I really loved it!
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Reviewed By: crystal lilith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 02:33 CDT
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hm, interesting...I'm curious about what really took place in the final battle. Dude, Keiko was f'en annoying...how the hell is she going to challenge someone with youkai blood...pure idiocy. She really needs a reality check or someone to smack some sense into her.
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 21:19 CDT
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PLZ let Yuseke find out what happened to kagome....
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