| "Comfort and Kindness" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very good story and I hope you do and 2nd story like this one and a 2nd part to this story.
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Reviewed By: AHGrayLensman On: January 25, 2004 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the overall plot and the directions taken with character development -- most of the re-imaginings of "Eva canon" here are pretty good, and a couple of them are unique to my knowledge. The dialogue was a little stilted here and there but not too badly. Spelling and grammar could use some help, though. There were also places in Chapter 10 and after that felt a bit rushed; those sections usually rife with wonky formatting, Unnecessarily Capitalized Words, or excessive! use! of! exclamation! points!
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Reviewed By: L33tfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! great fic. i've read sibling bonds and they both are great. I also agree with the quote at the end. "Thanks for all the fish". ::chuckles:: I love those books...
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Reviewed By: Anonymous assasin On: October 30, 2003 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Post the last chapter goddamit.
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Reviewed By: shinseieikyu On: October 29, 2003 09:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fic there. wow it really had my attention for the past 15 chapters, can't wait for the final chapter to be here. ^_^
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Reviewed By: chris kugler On: November 15, 2002 09:59 CST
Comment/Review:
pleeeeaaaaase post the last chapter soon. iv first read this on ff.net, and now ive found more of it here. i need closure! |
Reviewed By: Andres ocasio On: October 20, 2002 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yahoo chapter 15 finnaly here thanks, this chapter was great, it just keep getting better and better please update soon i can't wait to read the final chapter |
Reviewed By: *god x hunter* On: October 11, 2002 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
*yawn* is it just me but this fanfic's BORING(no offence)maybe because this kind of fanfic isn't my type. |
Reviewed By: andres ocasio On: August 31, 2002 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic is great and superb i like the fac that you put rei and chinji they make a good couple please update soon i can't wait to see how the story will end, if you want you can e-mail me at ramondoby aol so you can let me know when the last two chapters are gonna be put in this fanfic |
Reviewed By: NeoZeratul On: July 26, 2002 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fanfic. When is chapter 14 comming out? I have to see how this ends! The only thing I found wrong with it is the spelling and grammatical errors, which is why I rated it a 7. It probably deserves a lower mark, but since I myself am not perfect at that sort of thing, I didn't judge too harshly. The errors did not detract at all from the enjoyment of this story. Please finish it soon! |
