Reviewed By: A On: October 21, 2007 02:57 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: OMG!! So Angsty! I'm tempted to rate the enjoyment factor at a 0 just cause I like the konosetsu fluff but this was so awesome I just had to rate it at ten. Thank you for writing this!!
Reviewed By: C. On: June 15, 2007 14:40 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Well worth the wait!• I loved this chapter and I like how you showed the past of each character. I admit somethings were changed quite radically like the meeting of Setsuna and Konoka but it still seems very plausible and I'm curious to see how they will begin a friendship. I do hope Konoka doesn't remain in poor health. I like how you created Setsuna's past - It was absolutely inspiring. I hope you update soon. I really don't want to wait another six months.
